NaPoWriMo Day 9: variations on Carlos Williams

The prompt for day 8 was to rewrite a famous poem. I couldn’t decide between two of Carlos Williams’ poems “This is just to say” and “The Red Wheelbarrow” – so I did both.

21st C. Variations on a theme by Carlos-Williams

 

 

This Is Just To Say

 

I have eaten

the plums

that were in

the fridge

 

and which

you were probably

saving

for breakfast.

 

Let it go.

 

Anyway, they

tasted like

shit.

 

 

 

 

This Is Just To Say

 

I have eaten

the plums

that were in

the fridge

 

and which

you were probably

saving

for breakfast.

 

Sucked in.

 

 

 

 

middle-aged casanova

 

so much depends

on a red

sports

car

 

a toupé

 

an

 

u

p

w

a

r

d

l

y

 

mobile

personal

assistant

 

&

 

a

r

g

a

i

v

 

 

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